Talk:The Collaboratory

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Opening statement

I believe we need a bit more broad summary in the first paragraph. I added a link to Messiah's website (as suggested on the discussion page), but I think we also need to talk about what we do in concrete terms here (appropriate technology, development work, business/microfinance, whatever you feel is appropriate). As Chris said, a random visitor doesn't have a good idea of what DE is just by reading the first paragraph. Steve Frank 07:36, 21 September 2006 (PDT)

Chris and Steve are right, but as Joel and I continue to receive input on the direction of DE and the Collaboratory we find we must consider the possibility that the approach of the first paragraph may be fatally flawed. I will work on a better summery after we secure broader agreement and acceptance of what should be our direction. Dvader 15:13, 30 September 2006 (PDT)

Check out the modest changes made today and let me know what you think. Look for more adjustments as Joel and I work through the identity issue over the next few weeks. Dvader 14:52, 28 October 2006 (PDT)

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